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Crime time by antoanette Crime time by antoanette
model:me
photo and edit: ~Ayami7
MUA,hair: myself

This is also one of the old ones;)
Hope you like it:)
Njoy;)
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Given 2012-04-27
Crime time by *antoanette ( Suggested by Minato-Kushina and Featured by DistortedSmile )
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Critique by Bleakheart26 Bleakheart26/critique/675729695">Sep 2, 2012, 3:19:27 PM
Good: I love the colors in uses in this photo. Greens, reds, and various shadows that are all playing some effect. The strong Reds really pop in this photo. The bright red top helps pull the torso, waist, and gives her feet an end point in the photo. The deeper red is lovely here and contrasts the lighter colored legs+bottom. The lighter skin complexion gives a more pure look, but with those deeper reds give the teasing or more sensual suggestion to the image. The red REALLY pop forward from the green background. The green background is ornate, passive, non- repetitive, and makes up this photos environment well. The darker more shadowed hues on the lower bottom edge of the photo give the model a lighter almost floaty feel. But the pose would be more expressive like emanating a certain radiance. The flirtatiousness pose works well with good legs like that.

Not so good: Unfortunately the lower half of the left leg almost completely disappears behind the right leg with only the tips of the heal and toe exposed. The right foot is flat/ level with the photo. That leaves the foot /leg the feel as it is loose/limp and hanging off the chair. Sorta taking away some of the energy of the pose. The upper portion of the torso is not well viable, seeming that most of her attention is UP. But her face is turned toward the RIGHT side of the camera while her eyes are more facing the camera. If you really think about body language and what someone would really look like in say a flashy pose like this it would seem that there are some inconsistency in what you would expect in the facing of the pose to be like. Also some of the color could better be played out if the lighting was a little better. For example the legs are wonderful before the knee but after that all you see is how shapely the legs are and they're coated in pattern.

In conclusion. I could imagine you playing a little more with poses and lighting before settling on one photo. The dress, eye shadow, shoes, fishnet, lipstick, hair style all scream of fun/beauty/sensuality. The expression don't feel comfortable, body language confusing, and the light could really make all the effort in clothing and accessories pan out to something better and EXCEPTIONALLY beautiful. Truly lovely and well thought out with what is here. But I believe it could be more.

Having said that it is hard to critique a picture with out knowing the model or photographers goal. So consider it not so much a critique but merely my open minded thoughts. I still give you reasonably high rating but hope I shared the potential of the elements in this photo. Keep art fun, expressive, and play with it to see what the final peace could be like.
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:icondraktasus:
draktasus Featured By Owner May 12, 2015
this one makes me criminal
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:iconipaintu:
ipaintu Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Very inviting pose. Sexy.
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:iconkobem:
kobem Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015
 The harmony of the colors is simply fantastic. I do not even mention how lovely you are
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:iconlord-storm:
Lord-Storm Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014
You a're a beautiful young lady and quite am exceptional model
Love the fishnet stockings on such a great pair of legs
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:icongabrielbb:
GabrielBB Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
Beautiful, sweet, pretty, pretty girl
Hugs and kisses

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:icondorianorendain:
DorianOrendain Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Professional General Artist
WOW!
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:iconparziwal:
Parziwal Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
Wow! Great Photo!
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:icontodorovivaylo:
todorovivaylo Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
You are not only GRATE photographer,but also grate model!Do you have photoshoots with other photographers,Antoanette?
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:icongabrielbb:
GabrielBB Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
Beautiful, sweet, pretty girl
Hugs and kisses


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:iconzenakita:
ZenAkita Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous!
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:iconsirisaak:
sirisaak Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
Stunning!
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:iconrelhom:
relhom Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
congrats..:)
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:iconrinflorin:
RinFlorin Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
great colors, perfect shot!:)
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:iconkeep-breathing:
keep-breathing Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beautiful pose and style,you look beautiful!!:heart:
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:iconmarx77:
MARX77 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012   Photographer
Hi, Antonija
I know it's a little late, so....
BIG CONGRATULATIONS on your DD!!!

Well deserved! :clap:
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:iconmoodyblue:
MoodyBlue Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are sooooooo BEAUTIFUL! :iconyoureverywelcome:
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:iconkanutox:
KanutoX Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wonderful! Congratulations on the DD.
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:iconbronislavkordovanik:
BronislavKordovanik Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
such beatiful image !
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:iconsuperaimster:
SuperAimster Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congrats on the DD! :iconclappingplz:
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:iconangie-pictures:
Angie-Pictures Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
Beautiful work! Congratulations on the DD! :)
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:iconladye-authiel:
Ladye-Authiel Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This reminds me of my friend haha cool photo
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:icongaarafangirl54:
gaarafangirl54 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow. You're gorgeous.!
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:iconalyssa430:
alyssa430 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
Perfect!
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:iconcesardeveloper:
cesardeveloper Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student General Artist
So Cute :)
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:iconbrittney981:
brittney981 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student General Artist
too awesome :squee:
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:iconminato-kushina:
Minato-Kushina Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
:iconcongratsddplz: Many congratulations, my dear! :hug: It's a really beautiful and glamorous piece, like the rest of your artworks! :heart:

Keep up your talented job and good luck with your many messages today! :)
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:iconstuart-dillon:
Stuart-Dillon Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
this is a great shot very deserving of a dd
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:iconhokkalaz:
hokkalaz Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
no war make love
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:iconsirkraitol:
sirkraitol Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
:Q_______________________________
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:iconcjriswhoiis:
CJRiswhoIis Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
You look absolutely perfect in this photo!! I love how your dress pops out of the green background, great use on contrast. I also like how you still connected yourself to the green room by wearing green eyeshadow. Very nice :) :D
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:icondonttouchthemap:
DontTouchTheMap Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
such a beautiful photo, your pose is amazing and the colors are so nice. i just wish your face was a little more towards the camera, but the photo still looks great :)
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
Agree about the face...thank you:)
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:iconartworks-robinia:
Artworks-Robinia Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
wonderful =)
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:iconnouvellesea:
Nouvellesea Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
Very cool photo, well done
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:iconsandor09:
sandor09 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
Perfect!
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:icontiyab22:
Tiyab22 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student Artist
oh very like
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:iconnekoflashstudios:
nekoFLASHstudios Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:love: :love: :love: I normally don't click on DDs, but Gawd. This is awesome :aww:
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
Thank you:hug:
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:iconnekoflashstudios:
nekoFLASHstudios Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Any time!
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:iconbrandifort:
BrandiFort Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i am sorry if that sounded mean it really is an amazing pic and congrats on the DD
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
Not at all.Honesty is never mean. Only people who are narrowminded think of honest critique as mean thing. I think artist can learn a lot from an honest opinion:)
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:iconbrandifort:
BrandiFort Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am LOOOOOVIng the outfit and pose. backdrop is amazing, the ONLY thing i would critique would be the face, not that its bad, but that i wish i could see a LITTLE more of it
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
I agree totally.I am the model and I agree I haven't made the best expression on this one:)
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:iconbrandifort:
BrandiFort Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well great! i looove being critiqued but some people can get so upset. so i try and keep it minimal. thanks for being so open and willing to better yourself. :)
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:iconms-hermione-granger:
Ms-Hermione-Granger Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i agree. Such a beautiful face but it would be nice to see more of it.
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:iconnickolasblack:
NickolasBlack Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
very nice
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:icontheywillsuffice:
theywillsuffice Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
beautiful. the pose is fantastic and you're very gorgeous!
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:iconantoanette:
antoanette Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
Thank you,dear:)
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:icondrmcquark:
DrMcQuark Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Absolutely stunning! Congrats on the DD!
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:iconparammatharu:
ParamMatharu Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
its so beautiful ..
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